ENDYMION. BOOK III. HERE are who lord it o'er their fellow-men With most prevailing tinsel: who unpen Their baaing vanities, to browse away The comfortable green and juicy hay From human pastures; or, O torturing fact! Who, through an idiot blink, will see unpack'd Our gold and ripe-ear'd hopes. With not one tinge By the blear-eyed nations in empurpled vests, Of trumpets, shoutings, and belabour'd drums, 5 10 15 20 (1) Woodhouse notes that " Keats said, with much simplicity, It will be easily seen what I think of the present ministers, by the beginning of the third Book.' Perhaps the Quarterly Reviewer had heard of that simple saying. (5) The draft reads O devilish fact! - and in the next line with for through. (19) The draft has almost in place of past and. (21-3) The following rejected reading is from the draft: Or by ethereal things that, unconfin'd, As bees gorge full their cells. And, by the feud 40 'Twixt Nothing and Creation, I here swear, Eterne Apollo! that thy Sister fair Is of all these the gentlier-mightiest. When thy gold breath is misting in the west, She unobserved steals unto her throne, 45 And there she sits most meek and most alone; As if she had not pomp subservient ; As if thine eye, high Poet! was not bent (31-2) The draft yields the rejected couplet In the several vastnesses of air and fire; (34) The draft reads How few of these far majesties, how few! (38-9) These two lines stood thus in the draft and each every With spiritual honey fills to plenitude... } sense 50 (41) At the end of this line Keats wrote in the original draft, as if to localize the oath he was recording, "Oxford, Septr. 5." (42) The word eterne seems to be another reminiscence of Spenser: see Faerie Queene, Book III, Canto vi, Stanza 47: Yet is eterne in mutabilitie,... (44) The draft reads When thy gold hair falls thick about the west. (49) The draft has Upon in place of Towards. (50) This attribution of an active life of ministration to the stars is a recurrence of the idea in Book II, lines 184-5 by all the stars That tend thy bidding... Waiting for silver-footed messages. O Moon! the oldest shades 'mong oldest trees O Moon! old boughs lisp forth a holier din 55 60 And yet thy benediction passeth not One obscure hiding-place, one little spot Where pleasure may be sent: the nested wren (52) In the draft, Waiting the oldest shadows { 'mong} (56-7) The draft reads old trees. Thou dost bless all things- -even dead things sip A midnight life from thee. (63) In the draft, wrought for sent; and in the next line there is the cancelled reading, Quiet behind dark ivy leaves... (69) The draft reads The monstrous sea is thine-the monstrous sea! (70) In the draft old occurs in place of far. The word spooming for spuming, though not ordinarily found in dictionaries, was quite in Keats's line of reading. Thus Beaumont and Fletcher in The Double Marriage (Act II, Scene 1) have Down with the foresail too, we'll spoom before her. Dryden, in The Hind and the Panther, has When virtue spooms before a prosperous gale And Brooke, in Constantia, has The wind fresh blowing from the Syrian shore Swift through the floods her spooming vessel bore. (71) In the manuscript and in the corrected copy, his; but her was printed in the first edition, and corrected as an erratum, -the only one in some copies. The mistake arose through a pencilled marginal suggestion made in the printer's copy, not in Keats's writing. Cynthia where art thou now? What far abode Of green or silvery bower doth enshrine Such utmost beauty? Alas, thou dost pine For one as sorrowful: thy cheek is pale 75 For one whose cheek is pale: thou dost bewail His tears, who weeps for thee. Where dost thou sigh? Ah! surely that light peeps from Vesper's eye, Or what a thing is love! 'Tis She, but lo! How chang'd, how full of ache, how gone in woe! 80 Is wan on Neptune's blue: yet there's a stress Thou pointest out the way, and straight 'tis won. Thou leddest Orpheus through the gleams of death; (74) Cancelled reading of the draft, Thine for Such. (77-8) In the draft there was a false rhyme here, seen and remedied in copying out: Where art thou Ah Surely that light is from the Evening star... (86-7) The draft shows more than one tentative for this passage, thus: stays it Nor {there sleeps } the idleness — but glancing thence... Nor cradled idly - but down glancing thence... It mingles and starts about unfathomed... (89-90) In the draft this couplet reads — Enormous sharks from hiding-holes, and fright'ning (94-95) The draft reads thus — In air, or living flame- or magic shells, And now, O winged Chieftain! thou hast sent On gold sand impearl'd With lilly shells, and pebbles milky white, Of his heart's blood: 'twas very sweet; he stay'd To taste the gentle moon, and freshening beads, Far had he roam'd, With nothing save the hollow vast, that foam'd, 100 105 110 115 120 125 But those of Saturn's vintage; mouldering scrolls, 130 Who first were on the earth; and sculptures rude |