Until that grove appear'd, as if perchance, On things for which no wording can be found; 950 955 960 965 970 What wouldst thou ere we all are laid on bier?" Press'd, saying: "Sister, I would have command, 975 If it were heaven's will, on our sad fate." (949-50) In the draft Until he saw that grove, as if perchance, (951) The inverted commas are closed after Ha! in the first edition; but it is not so in the manuscript; and the matter is set right in the corrected copy. (955) Cancelled reading of the manuscript, And by Promethean... This was probably rejected to get rid of the repetition of the word by. (956) The draft reads And by old Saturn's single forelock... (957) The draft reads prelude for vesper. (968) It is worth noting that, when writing out the fair copy, Keats made three several attempts to spell this word aisles rightly, having first written it isles, then atles and lastly aisles. (974-7) The draft reads as follows: Her brother kiss'd her, and his lady's hand To Endymion's amaze : "By Cupid's dove, Her lucid bow, continuing thus: Drear, drear 980 985 Withheld me first; and then decrees of fate; 990 And then 'twas fit that from this mortal state Thou shouldst, my love, by some unlook'd for change As was thy cradle; hither shalt thou flee 995 To meet us many a time." Next Cynthia bright Peona kiss'd, and bless'd with fair good night: Her brother kiss'd her too, and knelt adown Before his goddess, in a blissful swoon. They vanish'd far away!— Peona went Home through the gloomy wood in wonderment. THE END. 1000 (984-6) In the draft thus: Her long black Hair swell'd ampler, while it turned Golden and her eyes of jet dawned forth a brighter day (997-8) In the finished manuscript the word kist occurs twice in these two lines instead of kiss'd as in the first edition; but bless'd is not similarly transformed to blest. (1003) At the end of the draft Keats wrote " Burford Bridge Nov. 28. 1817-". The imprint of Endymion is as follows: T. Miller, Printer, Noble Street, Cheapside. LAMIA, ISABELLA, THE EVE OF ST. AGNES, AND OTHER POEMS. BY JOHN KEATS, AUTHOR OF ENDYMION. LONDON: PRINTED FOR TAYLOR AND HESSEY, FLEET-STREET. ADVERTISEMENT. IF any apology be thought necessary for the appearance of the unfinished poem of HYPERION, the publishers beg to state that they alone are responsible, as it was printed at their particular request, and contrary to the wish of the author. The poem was intended to have been of equal length with ENDYMION, but the reception given to that work discouraged the author from proceeding. Fleet-Street, June 26, 1820. (217) |